This is a taste test - A sample of what I have been working on over the past few days. Coming up with the initial idea for a story is not that difficult.
I try to always put an original spin on my Fantasy writing - and allow a story to develop that allows me to give it a twist. You can say 'Hasn't Fantasy been done to death. Isn't it about Vampires and Werewolves, Zombies and things that jump out of cupboards with an axe to slash to you death.
I say 'Not at all.'
Fantasy is only limited to the writers imagination. It should be dark and gritty, fast paced and unique in every creation. I may use the initial form of a fairy for instance, but in no way will I call my character a fairy. I instead, find a new name for the creature. A new reason for it being placed in the story and if possible, a very new talent that I hope entices the reader to continue on with the story.
It is hard to leave an audience wanting, but it is a must with a good writer.
Feathers
“Do you think I care if they cut your head
off? It makes no mind to me Mister; after all, it’s your fault we’re in this
mess. Call yourself a bloody thief - you’re an embarrassment.”
This was the umpteenth time Bing had
erupted into a raging telling off and his partner in crime shifted noisily in
his shackles. The iron cuffs around his legs bit cruelly into his pale skin.
Mumbling and low curses wasn’t the answer, but it was the next best thing and
Grain was just as angry. At himself and at the smart arse Officer, who had
without any reason, tossed them like a bad salad into the Hole.
Above, hung a circle of blue, every now and
then, it was permeated with white floating clouds and Grain let slide a tear at
what he knew was his last day. They didn’t have the money to pay the fine and
that meant only one thing - the Slavers Block. He wouldn’t last a day if that
happened, chained to the belly of a gallery, rowing with a bunch of bastards
and murderers.
He couldn’t see past a fleas fart in the
darkness and jumped when he felt the tickle on his ear. Hesitantly, Grain
raised a hand thinking to brush away the offending insect and was surprised to
feel the flutter of wings on his cheek. Grain let out a yell as a set of tiny
feet landed on his finger.
“What is it Grain, need a lullaby to help you
stop the black jitters. Afraid that tomorrow will come and find you wanting.”
There was enough scorn in Bing’s voce to light a fire up his sore backside, but
he said not a word. “No … no answer. Well I guess it’s for the best bud, soon
the sun will set and that is when the real waiting begins.”
Grain was afraid to move and for a short
time, he kept his finger stiff and straight, feeling the weight of those tiny
feet balancing lightly and with what seemed practiced ease on his hand. But,
the time dragged and the blue circle above their heads, began to darken. Night
was falling and the long wait as Bing had boasted an hour ago was upon them.